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With each Barbed wire
Like a cold cool night that drifts into the memory
a sanctuary lost in a sea of uncertainness
the lonely feeling that crushes the very reason for living
the thing that keeps you alive drips from your wounds
no matter what is done the pain lingers like a dagger in your soul
like the blood on a barbed wire, it is clearly seen
like the river that never stops, this guilt never ends
Like a nightmare that never subsides
like a heart beat that soon fades with the sound of the last breaths taken
a reason for living, died along with the heartache
like a cliff branched out over the ocean shore
there's a way, but the loss of the meaning cl
How to Fix The World
How strange
This abomination...
an execution, while play
The howling strings
Of the cellos
Of the veins
Of the time
Of humanity.

To the discord
Are the who and what,
the how and the why
Ever lost to that
of the cords
of the strings
of the howling
of History.

"Fix this", they cry,
the masses whose
words fester and boil,
carried words, spoken indirect
of the leaders
of the struggles
of the home
of the brave

The final breath
of humanities dying words
"in ashes, from ashes"
She speaks, so melancholy
of the future
of the present
of the past
of Civilization.

"World!" She pleads
with a cry, so finishing
"Heed an
The Forward Movement
Tragedy, abrupt to my very soul,
that left me far from whole.

The withered memory born unto my dreams again,
refreshed and once more binding me by chain.

The reopening scars I once upon a time, thought healed,
gape wide to open for the flood gates, red and revealed.

My witnessing eyes bleed out old tears from a rusted well,
Attempting again to put back out the fires of this age old Hell.

The rising waters find my feet and climb,
the two floods meet, where their cause is rhymed.

My heart from which the blood and tears flow,
now at where the pain does ever grow.

Close these outpouring wounds, build back up the walls...
Make for my
Aspire
The ground of celestial perfection is infinity away from the tallest tower.
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Deceitful Heart

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When your heart throws a beat
You cant understand
Your life is suddenly
Uppside down

I can feel the pain
Beating through my veins
The rhythm pulsing
Burning, searing pain
Life soon to stop
A sudden end

When your heart throws a beat
You cant understand
Your life is suddenly
Uppside down

Can you see my agony
My fear of falling
My short life
All in wain!
All because of this needless pain!
I have to leave you soon
My strength do have an end!
My dearest friend

When your heart throws a beat
You cant understand
Your life is suddenly
Uppside down

A hidden defect
A hidden pain
My heart beating
TO FAST!
SOON TO END!
Can you see my fear of falling
Dont try to catch me
It`s useless my friend

The rhythm so wild
No drum can follow
The beat so crazy
My mind so hollow
The pain finally coming to an end
Please do not cry for me
I will see you on the borderline
My dearest friend
So do not cry for me
I`ll see you again

When your heart throws a beat
You cant understand
Your life is suddenly
Uppside down

When your heart throws a beat
You cant understand
Your life is suddenly
Uppside down



Inspired by Jimmy "The Rev" Sullivan and my own heart defect.... R.I.P Jimmy, thank you for giving me the strength to carry on!
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lyrics inspired by Jimmy "The Rev" Sullivan and my own Deceitful Heart... Thank you Jimmy, for giving me the strength to carry on!
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Mood: Love ~VictorSeven Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the realistic hearts, are so great :D
and, also, I don't know so much of english, but I think the poem is perfect to me :3
In my language, I say that es mįs precioso, que el canto del alba, cuando aśn todos duermen, les vela en dulce muerte, del dķa anterior.
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Mood: Joy *Burned0by0Moonlight Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you! nuestra Tal vez deberķa darte las gracias en su idioma... dont know if this is written the right way thought... :)
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~VictorSeven Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahahaha, so cute ^^
don't worry 'bout the language, it's ok ^^
Cheers to you :3
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~blackstormwarrior Nov 27, 2012  Student General Artist
Beautiful poem... and the heart looks like a chicken to me...
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Mood: Joy *Burned0by0Moonlight Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks! ^^
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!anthonylino Nov 27, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Beautiful work..
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Mood: Joy *Burned0by0Moonlight Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks! :D
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~Ricky311 Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Magnificent.
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Mood: Joy *Burned0by0Moonlight Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you... :)
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~Ricky311 Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem.
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